One or two sentences that say who this is for and what changes for them. Keep it concrete — name the problem you remove, not the adjectives you like.
Two lines on what this includes and the outcome the client walks away with.
Two lines on what this includes and the outcome the client walks away with.
Two lines on what this includes and the outcome the client walks away with.
A short paragraph of context — how long you’ve been doing this, who you do it for, and the one thing that makes your approach different from the obvious alternative.
One line that lowers the barrier — how quickly you reply, that the first call is free, that there’s no commitment.